Pin yin practice

I'll try to convert this into Han zi/characters later but for now I just want to get the pin yin right.

Ni hao.Wo jiao Brandon. Wo shi yi ge Mei Guo ren zai Zhong guo.
Wo jiao Ying yu zai yi ge (?) da xue. (It's an interesting) gong zuo.
Zui jin, wo (often) xue xi Zhongwen dan shi wo bu zhi dao ru guo wo zai
(making much/any progress).Wo de ai hao shi kan (kan) dian ying, kan shu
he surfing the internet (shang wan?). Wo ye xi huan (travelling).
Wo de zui xi huan (de) dian ying shi: Batman Begins, The LOTR Trilogy,
The Elephant Man and the Shawshank Redemption.Mei tian hen duo
Zhong guo ren shuo/wen wo, "Ni ke yi shuo Zhong wen ma?"
(to which I reply/say), "Yi dian!". Ran hou ta men xiao!

REVISED:
ni hao.wo jiao Brandon.Wo shi yi ge zai zhong guo de mei guo ren.wo zai yi ge da xue jiao ying yu.zhe shi yi ge hen you yi si de gong zuo.zui jin,wo jing chang xue xi zhong wen,dan shi wo bu zhi dao wo shi bu shi zai jin bu.wo de ai hao shi kan dian ying,kan shu he shang wang.wo ye xi huan lv you.wo zui xi huan de dian ying shi: Batman begins,...mei tian ,hen duo zhong guo ren wen wo :"ni ke yi shuo zhong wen ma ?" wo hui da shuo:"yi dian dian "ran hou ta men jiu xiao le.